Hi,
Wow, that one has certainly stirred my little grey cells.
Like, like is such as passive word. I won't say I like it, as I find the subject matter extremely troubling, and without giving the game away at all, I think anyone that understands the UFO cannon would have to say the same thing.
In the multi-faceted and many-pieced jigsaw that is UFO, your story would certainly be necessary (or something around the same lines) to logically fill a vacant jigsaw place as the subject matter would eventually have to be considered, examined and duly dealt with. This eventually (Straker's actions) is/are one that had not occurred to me, but the events are at this stage of the game are plausible, and you have written with great tact and sensitivity.
Yes, I am troubled with the subject (to be fair, maybe as it's a little tooclose to home), but the need at some stage to tackle this subject cannot be argued with.
Yes, I think you have 'pulled it off'. No, I know you have, as it is going to be at the forefront of my thoughts for quite a few days.
Kind regards,
Griff
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> I have a new story on my web site; my response to the Shado Writers' Guild Challenge.
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> Lines of Communication - the full story behind Last Post
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http://lightcudder.weebly.com/lines-of-communication.html>
> Not sure what I feel about it, but you might enjoy it.!
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