new UFO story

Hey guys!
I finished my newest UFO story and it is at my website to be enjoyed.
http://denisefelt.weebly.com/the-catalyst.html
Special note to dragon and Pam: I added a dedication to the story for you two. (Thanks, Pam, for letting me use you to intrigue the Commander. And as always: thanks, dragon, for inspiring me!)

I'd like to add a UFO links page to my site. Can I add your site, Marc?
Yours,
Denise

> I'd like to add a UFO links page to my site. Can I add your site, Marc?

Well, of course...

Marc

Oh Boy I like this story!!
 Great to read a new one. Fabulously written and full of suspense and emotion - just what i like !
Thankyou 
 Louise
 

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From: neesierie <[hidden email]>
Subject: [SHADO] new UFO story
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Date: Saturday, November 28, 2009, 3:26 PM


 



Hey guys!
I finished my newest UFO story and it is at my website to be enjoyed.
http://denisefelt. weebly.com/ the-catalyst. html
Special note to dragon and Pam: I added a dedication to the story for you two. (Thanks, Pam, for letting me use you to intrigue the Commander. And as always: thanks, dragon, for inspiring me!)

I'd like to add a UFO links page to my site. Can I add your site, Marc?
Yours,
Denise









     

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Me again! Do you want serious reviews for this story, Denise? if so where to? I always appreciate reviews and would like to do decent length one on this story. ( Bit miffed though- I used the idea of Prime numbers for alien craft in a story for next year - you've used odd numbers for catalysts! - great minds think alike - or do fools sometimes differ?)
Louise

--- On Sat, 11/28/09, neesierie <[hidden email]> wrote:


From: neesierie <[hidden email]>
Subject: [SHADO] new UFO story
To: [hidden email]
Date: Saturday, November 28, 2009, 3:26 PM


 



Hey guys!
I finished my newest UFO story and it is at my website to be enjoyed.
http://denisefelt. weebly.com/ the-catalyst. html
Special note to dragon and Pam: I added a dedication to the story for you two. (Thanks, Pam, for letting me use you to intrigue the Commander. And as always: thanks, dragon, for inspiring me!)

I'd like to add a UFO links page to my site. Can I add your site, Marc?
Yours,
Denise









     

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Louise,
I'd love a review from you! Private emails are best for that sort of thing. There used to be a UFO writers group a long time ago that shared storiesand opinions, but I've found that the best feedback is one-on-one. My email addy is: [hidden email] . I'm only sorry that I haven't had the chance to read your stories yet. I've been busy writing during every sparemoment. Once this story took off, I couldn't stop it! But now that it's finished, maybe I can do some reading.

I think all numbers are awesome, so I try to have some fun with them in my stories. Prime numbers would be great to play with. Have fun! And don't worry about any overlapping of ideas. We writers are a creative bunch and often pick similar topics to explore. And sometimes reading one writer's story will spark an idea for a story you want to write. (My friend dragon is always writing stories that get me wondering how I'd handle that topic. She's cool and doesn't mind being my inspiration. In turn, I try to note whenever she's inspired me.) The only time that using similar topics is a problem is when deliberate plagiarism occurs. But true writers would die first. And the others don't really matter in the long run.

My beta tester gave me a few tips on how to make my story flow better, so tonight I added a few lines in Chapter 6 to correct any leaping of thought that I did. Before writing a review, you may want to go back over that chapter. Any problems you had following the flow of the story have hopefully been corrected.

(Psst! Did you catch the movie reference?)

Yours,
Denise    

--- In [hidden email], Louise Oatridge <louise.oatridge@...> wrote:
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> Me again! Do you want serious reviews for this story, Denise? if so whereto? I always appreciate reviews and would like to do decent length one on this story. ( Bit miffed though- I used the idea of Prime numbers for aliencraft in a story for next year - you've used odd numbers for catalysts! - great minds think alike - or do fools sometimes differ?)
> Louise

Louise,
I just finished reading your first two stories. I won't read the 3rd untilit's all there. I have this thing about having to wait to finish a story.But so far, I've really enjoyed it. If you'll get me your email addy, I'll send you a detailed review.
Yours,
Denise

Marc,
Thanks so much! I also took the liberty of adding the SHADO Library and Tim's Great Dialogues links to my new page on the site. I don't think eitherDeb or Tim will mind. (If you do, tell me!) The new links page can be viewed by going here:
http://denisefelt.weebly.com/ufo-links.html
I'm always on the lookout for new UFO series sites online, so if anyone else wants their UFO site added to my links page, please contact me privately at [hidden email] . I reserve the right to check out your site first before adding it.
Yours,
Denise


--- In [hidden email], "Marc Martin" <marc@...> wrote:
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> > I'd like to add a UFO links page to my site. Can I add your site, Marc?
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> Well, of course...
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> Marc
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