Dave's UFO cartoon

> Dave, is this what you had in mind?
>
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SHADO/files/ufr.JPG
>
> I don't know if I got the size scaling correct on the
> weapon or not.I hope you don't mind generic style bodies,
> when they get that far away, you can't make out their
> faces anyway.The small outlines surrounding the bodies are
> blood.The text will fit at the bottom where there is more
> room. Some cropping may occur in the final version.
> Any layout changes, further ideas/suggestions etc?
>
> Kevin.
>
>

> Dave, is this what you had in mind?
>
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SHADO/files/ufr.JPG
>
> I don't know if I got the size scaling correct on the
> weapon or not.I hope you don't mind generic style bodies,
> when they get that far away, you can't make out their
> faces anyway.The small outlines surrounding the bodies are
> blood.The text will fit at the bottom where there is more
> room. Some cropping may occur in the final version.
> Any layout changes, further ideas/suggestions etc?
>
> Kevin.
>
>

> --- In [hidden email], "davrecon" <davrecon@n...> wrote:
> >
> >
> > I would make Paul's gun barrel a bit more lowered in the
> picture, to
> > emphasize the smoke coming out of it, (more obvious visually that
> he fired
> > it), and maybe extend the pile of bodies away from the UFO, so
> they are
> > visible over Paul's other shoulder too,
>
>
> Here is version 2 Dave:
>
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SHADO/files/ufol.JPG
>
> With the alterations you suggested,I have changed the gun to the
> centre of the picture and lowered it to give it more room and so it
> doesn't point out of the picture.I originally put Foster on the
> right hand side,but since he has the first text, I had to swap it
> over.It will be redrawn and neatened up before colouring.
> I copied and pasted the bodies just to add more of them, and
> these will be redrawn as well.I had drawn the UFO crashed into a
> tree (one of the paddles is shown fallen off), but I've put it
> further away now, so it's a bit harder to see. Bryan suggested
> another UFO in the sky, do you want another added?
> I think "Foster's First Day" was your title, I'll check your post
> for the correct text.
>
> Regards, Kevin
>

> --- In [hidden email], "davrecon" wrote:
> >
> >
> > I would make Paul's gun barrel a bit more lowered in the
> picture, to
> > emphasize the smoke coming out of it, (more obvious visually that
> he fired
> > it), and maybe extend the pile of bodies away from the UFO, so
> they are
> > visible over Paul's other shoulder too,
>
>
> Here is version 2 Dave:
>
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SHADO/files/ufol.JPG
>
> With the alterations you suggested,I have changed the gun to the
> centre of the picture and lowered it to give it more room and so it
> doesn't point out of the picture.I originally put Foster on the
> right hand side,but since he has the first text, I had to swap it
> over.It will be redrawn and neatened up before colouring.
> I copied and pasted the bodies just to add more of them, and
> these will be redrawn as well.I had drawn the UFO crashed into a
> tree (one of the paddles is shown fallen off), but I've put it
> further away now, so it's a bit harder to see. Bryan suggested
> another UFO in the sky, do you want another added?
> I think "Foster's First Day" was your title, I'll check your post
> for the correct text.
>
> Regards, Kevin
>